I love the drunken proposal scene. I love your use of commas in “Thassnot a pair, thassa single, card, cheater!” and the “spill- spin-pinched myself” stuttering. I love organized Hermione carrying a Sobering Potion on her (wouldn’t have occurred to those two dolts).
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Date: 2007-06-29 04:47 pm (UTC)I love the drunken proposal scene. I love your use of commas in “Thassnot a pair, thassa single, card, cheater!” and the “spill- spin-pinched myself” stuttering. I love organized Hermione carrying a Sobering Potion on her (wouldn’t have occurred to those two dolts).
Quite an unexpected turn, and very funny!